ONE DAY (the One Day Prompt)

The phrase ‘One Day’ set me thinking of a poem by Alun Lewis whose work I’d recently been re-reading, and try as I might I can’t get it out of my mind. One Day is not the same as All Day, yet the two phrases seemed to fuse. The Lewis poem, All Day It Has Rained, is about one day in the life of a group of soldiers stationed in Hampshire, during the Great War.

All Day It Has Rained

This is one of Lewis’s greatest poems, one of the great World War 1 poems even if guns and five-nines aren’t even mentioned. The wealth of observation and the matter-of-fact vocabulary lifts the poem from the everyday: nothing about the poem is predictable, from the down to earth vocabulary to rhythm and metre.

And now I shall have to read something else to get it out of my mind!

Here is the first part of the poem. If you don’t know it and would like to read the rest of it, it can be found online.

All Day It Has Rained

All day it has rained, and we on the edge of the moors
Have sprawled in our bell-tents, moody and dull as boors,
Groundsheets and blankets spread on the muddy ground
And from the first grey wakening we have found
No refuge from the skirmishing fine rain
And the wind that made the canvas heave and flap
And the taut wet guy-ropes ravel out and snap.
All day the rain has glided, wave and mist and dream,
Drenching the gorse and heather, a gossamer stream
Too light to stir the acorns that suddenly
Snatched from their cups by the wild south-westerly
Pattered against the tent and our upturned dreaming faces.
And we stretched out, unbuttoning our braces,
Smoking a Woodbine, darning dirty socks,
Reading the Sunday papers – I saw a fox
And mentioned it in the note I scribbled home; –
And we talked of girls and dropping bombs on Rome,
And thought of the quiet dead and the loud celebrities
Exhorting us to slaughter, and the herded refugees:

…….

Tomorrow maybe love; but now it is the rain
Possesses us entirely, the twilight and the rain.

Linked to One Day Prompt

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16 responses to “ONE DAY (the One Day Prompt)”

  1. Anabel @ The Glasgow Gallivanter Avatar

    Wow, Mari, i had never read that before. We forget in the horrors of war there must have been so much time just waiting for the next thing to happen. Boring – but probably scary too.

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    1. maristravels Avatar

      If it’s not belittling he poem, it also reminded me of the boredom of childhood, sitting indoors looking out at the persistent rain which seemed to go on forever. And of course, for the troops bivouacked in damp fields and forests, it was so much worse – even if they enjoyed the freedom from combat.

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  2. SueW Avatar

    Such a moving poem, I will take a look on line and read the remaining. Thank you for taking part in the One Day Challenge.

    Regarding your site, have you tried reverting to your original theme, you may find everything is still intact. 🤞

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    1. maristravels Avatar

      Yes I have tried that, Sue, but it didn’t work. The problem is compounded by the fact that I have workmen in at the moment and it is very noisy, with drilling, hammering, singing etc. I can’t get away from it and although I have my computer now in my bedroom, it is not comfortable for working on so I can only do short shifts. I’ll persevere though and get there eventually. I’ve read your advice to Jo below, and found that very usefuol as well. Thank you.

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      1. SueW Avatar

        Oh. You poor thing. I hate it when we have work done. Hopefully, the outcome will be worth it.

        I’m glad you found the windows 11 info useful, thank you for saying. . All the very best with your site. I re-did my Nans Farm site a couple of years back and getting it just right was frustrating. I’m leaving Weekly Prompts well alone! 😆

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  3. Prior... Avatar

    I enjoyed that part of the poem, really good –
    ….
    we have found
    No refuge from the skirmishing fine rain

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    1. maristravels Avatar

      Don’t mention rain! We’ve had two days of torrential rain which makes it impossible to go out. I enjoy a walk in the rain but not in rain and wind.

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      1. Prior... Avatar

        yes… the rain and wind changes it all.
        and so let’s not mention it anymore – ha!
        🙂🙂

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  4. Panagah Amn Avatar

    Hi can you please share my website please on your page.🙏🙏. Or reblog one of my stories🙏
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  5. Lookoom Avatar

    I understand how persistent rain can make life miserable when you have nowhere to take shelter. Like war, which swallows everything and leaves no room for escape.

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  6. restlessjo Avatar

    No, I don’t know it, Marie. It’s desolate, isn’t it? How many soldiers around the world are experiencing life like this? It is ineffably sad. xx

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    1. maristravels Avatar

      Yes, and how well he describes the boredom of a day like this, and think how many days like this there were – and are – and not just for soldiers.

      I was all set to make a return to blogging tonight but I took a dislike to my site and instead of just changing the header picture I changed the theme and now I can’t get it right. Some of my pictures have disappeared (and 4 from Pixabay have gone leaving only the caption so I presume they didn’t fit) and there is more blue in the spectrum, and oh, well, it’s a mess, so I’ve got to spend some time now just fixing that! Plod on!

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      1. restlessjo Avatar

        Bless you darlin. Nothing’s easy, is it? Microsoft keep threatening me with expulsion or whatever if I don’t conform to Windows 11. Pain in the backside. Don’t give up xx

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    2. SueW Avatar

      Jo, My laptop came with Windows 11. The downside is, some older software will not work on Windows 11. But, as you already know, Windows 10 will not be supported if you don’t upgrade (no Windows security etc). If you upgrade further down the line, you might be charged a fee. ⚖️ Difficult choice.

      I also have an old faithful desktop computer running on Windows 10, I had no intention of upgrading because I wanted to keep using some of the older software. Then Microsoft sent a message telling me my desktop machine was too old to upgrade to Windows 11 – this suits me fine, I’ll take my chances with my own security! 🙂 xx

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      1. restlessjo Avatar

        Thanks Sue. I always make wrong choices when it comes to technology, unfortunately xx

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      2. SueW Avatar

        We’ve probably all done that at one time or another.😀

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